Changes to First Draft

I have had a one-to-one with my media teacher. She watched my video and suggested some changes:

• There needs to be more narrative - There needs to be clips of the boy making the project in the stop frame.This is so that it is clear that he is making it. I need to insert clips of the boy making the stop frame and then cut to the scene he has just done. I could also show his failures and successes.
• In the montages at the beginning and end, there needs to be sound effects rather than it just being silent.
• There needs to be more movement in relation to the Lego.

For this scene, the characters could swap places or they could rotate around

For this scene, I could have them moving (more fluently) and have a love heart moving behind them until they are inside it